The charts above show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams show the percentage of
food
expenditures of the average family spent in restaurants
in different decades.The other graph gives information about the number of meals
eaten in fast food
and sit-down restaurants
.Totally
,information is given from 1970 to 2000.
Starting with the first pie chart it is evident that more people preferred home cooking rather than going out to cafes because eat percentage of Rephrase
In total
food
budget spent on Correct article usage
the food
restaurants
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurant
meals
was only 10%.Next
decade the eating out spends were about 5% more than Correct article usage
The next
previous
year of research.In 1990 we can see that Add an article
the previous
percentage
in 1990 had sharply grown and was already 35%.In Correct article usage
the percentage
next
10 Correct article usage
the next
years
it is obvious that Add a comma
years,
trend
lasted because home eating took only half of the graph.
The second pie chart shows that in 1970 the number of Correct article usage
the trend
meals
eaten both in fast food
and sit-down restaurants
was equal.However
,in 1980 the sit-down places had a slight
bigger popularity Change the word
slightly
that
fast Correct word choice
than
food
.Despite being second in 1980,fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
places had sharp grow
and bypassed sit-down Replace the word
growth
restaurants
.In 2000 the fast food
meals
eaten were about 80,while
in sit-down restaurants
it was a bit less than 50Submitted by mrtwaterr on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants, meals with synonyms.
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