The line graph below illustrates the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton over a period of 30 years between 1980 and 2010.
The line chart displays the
proportion
of tourists
to England that visited four touristic
attractions in Replace the word
tourist
Brighton
from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, the most significant feature of recorded
period is that foreign Add an article
the recorded
tourists
who visited art galleries in Brighton
saw a slight decrease. The percentage of foreign visitors who visited pavilions increased gradually, while
the proportion
of tourists
who went piers
rose more significantly between 1980 to 2010. The figure for festivals in Change preposition
to piers
Brighton
which are visited by foreign visitors remained relatively stable over the 30-year period.
The proportion
of tourists
visited
pavilions in Correct pronoun usage
who visited
Brighton
was around a quarter in 1980, and this
climbed dramatically to almost a
half in 1995 before declining drastically to just over 30% in 2010. The Correct article usage
apply
amount
of foreign visitors who visited piers Change the quantifier
number
was fluctuated
between just under 10% and around 15% between 1980 and 2000. Change to the active voice
fluctuated
After
this
fluctuation, it saw a noticeable increase of roughly 10%, finishing at just above 20% at the end
of the period.
The proportion
of tourists
went
Correct pronoun usage
who went
art
exhibitions in Change preposition
to art
Brighton
was just above a fifth and this
figure increased to a peak of just below 40% in 1985; however
, this
ratio decreased to just below a tenth over the 25 years. The percentage of tourists
visited
festivals fell slightly from about 30% to just under %30 from 1980 to 1985 and Correct pronoun usage
who visited
then
this
ratio remained relatively stable at this
level after 25 years.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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