The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The given bar chart illustrates how weekly salary was spent on several items by families in a state in 1968 and 2018. By and large, in 1968 Food
that
was ranked the first underwent the most significant decline in 2018. Meanwhile, Fuel and Power remained the lowest throughout the period.
Correct pronoun usage
which
To begin
with, in 1968, spent
on food was comparably the highest with 35%. The closest competitors were Housing and Fashion which both in 10%. Wrong verb form
spending
However
, that amount reduced to bellow
20% in 2018 and the highest position was taken by leisure with over 20% which underwent a tremendous improvement. In Correct your spelling
below
this
year, the second place was filled by housing with nearly 20%.
Meanwhile, Fuel and Power consistently became the lowest. It started with 6% in 1968. This
was relatively low If compared to the other unpopular division
Fix the agreement mistake
divisions
such
as domestic goods (7%) and personal Goods (7%). Moreover
, its amount reduced to 4% and remained at the bottom tier along with
personal goods in 2018.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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