The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The given bar chart illustrates how weekly salary was spent on several items by families in a state in 1968 and 2018. By and large, in 1968 Food
that
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was ranked the first underwent the most significant decline in 2018. Meanwhile, Fuel and Power remained the lowest throughout the period.
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with, in 1968,
spent
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on food was comparably the highest with 35%. The closest competitors were Housing and Fashion which both in 10%.
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, that amount reduced to
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20% in 2018 and the highest position was taken by leisure with over 20% which underwent a tremendous improvement. In
this
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year, the second place was filled by housing with nearly 20%. Meanwhile, Fuel and Power consistently became the lowest. It started with 6% in 1968.
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was relatively low If compared to the other unpopular
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such
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as domestic goods (7%) and personal Goods (7%).
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, its amount reduced to 4% and remained at the bottom tier
along with
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personal goods in 2018.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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