The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram display the procedure of how hydroelectric power plant produce electricity.
Overall
, there is
two modes of operation, which are Change the verb form
are
day
mode and night mode that included
the reversible operation of turbines.
First of all, Wrong verb form
include
the
Correct article usage
a
water
source such
as a river can be used to fill the dam with high-level
reservoir. During the Correct article usage
a high-level
day
, the intake gate that can be found at the bottom of the dam will be opened hence
making the water
flow downhill through the long pipe. As the water
moves in the lower place, it will then
rotate the turbine to making
a mechanical Wrong verb form
make
enegry
coming from those Correct your spelling
energy
motion
. Fix the agreement mistake
motions
Thereafter
the electricity is generated by generator
and Correct article usage
a generator
become
the supply of the national power grid after Change the verb form
becomes
going
passing through the power lines.
Meanwhile, during the night, the Verb problem
apply
water
that once had been passed the turbine will then
storaged
at Add a missing verb
be storaged
low-level
reservoir before it Correct article usage
a low-level
finally
pumped back uphill by Add a missing verb
is finally
reversible
turbine to the high-level Add an article
the reversible
a reversible
of
reservoir. After all of the Change preposition
apply
water
placed
uphill, the intake gate will be closed and opened again the next Add a missing verb
is placed
day
. Finally
, all of the steps will be repeated all over again the next day
and onwards.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words day, water with synonyms.
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