Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is believed that there are two feasible routes to move on

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academic career. Compared to getting into a

university

which possibly

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students

' success, applying for a

job

after high school graduation benefits

school-leavers

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to some extent. In my opinion, studying at

university

place

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places

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a firm background for

job

appliants

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applicants

.

This

essay will elaborate both viewpoints and

illumiate

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illuminate

writer's

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opinion. Attending

to

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a

university

could benefit the young in favour of knowledge and promotion.

In other words

,

university

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the university

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provides

students

with several academic lectures, which acts as a prerequisite for recruitment.

For example

, most of

young

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newcomers to John Hunting have a

university

degree as the first impression to their interviewers.

Moreover

, if young employees have an academic qualification, therein lies a potential promotion, so they can receive more salary.

For instance

, managers in many big companies are

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excellent

graduate

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graduates

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;

therefore

, they receive a bundle of money to

their

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best ability. Personally, continuing a study process is a firm foundation for those who long for

reputation

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and

remunerative

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job

.

However

, the appearance of vocational

school

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schools

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has grown as a recent trend for the young who have no momentum to vie for

university

. These teenagers’ similarity is to gain work experience sooner than

students

sitting in a

university

.

Therefore

, they are capable of bearing workplace pressure since they have been working for a long period since the graduation of

students

.

For example

, many teenagers choose to work at a

babershop

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barbershop

barber shop

or business vendor for the ability of endurance. Plus, they create a connection with the community in order to open their friend circle. It is possible to get a

job

at an early age to expand your friend network since you have to meet other people. Taking some footballers in Vietnam as an example, they do not get into a

university

yet they improve their

sport

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skills

then

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and then

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play for their regional team.

As a result

, they have a multitude of relationships. In conclusion, both

university

and society could teach you much information and challenge your competency. As an exponent of academic

institution

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institutions

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, I ascertain that

university

plays an essential role in orientation and self-improvement.