The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the current region of Norbiton's
town
and the proposed changes in the future in a particular
town
.
Overall
, Norbiton's
town
is void, with farmland and, alongside, a
river
that runs, and a factory located in one corner. The suggested map shows that the
town
will be by far the most significantly developed place. There will be phenomenal replacements and massive building construction. Currently, the
town
looks like a space. Only there is farmland on one side; beside it, a long
river
is meandering parallel.
Moreover
, there is a factory on another side of the
town
in one corner.
According to
the proposal, the
river
will be bifurcated by a road
that is
extended from a circular road present in the heart of the
town
.
In addition
to it, various new buildings will be constructed near a
river
. A retail district will be opened tangentially to the circular pathway, a school will exist in the north, and there will be a playground near the school and in between the road and
river
.
Finally
, the factory area will be converted into a residential zone.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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