The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the current region of Norbiton's
town
and the proposed changes in the future in a particular town
.
Overall
, Norbiton's town
is void, with farmland and, alongside, a river
that runs, and a factory located in one corner. The suggested map shows that the town
will be by far the most significantly developed place. There will be phenomenal replacements and massive building construction.
Currently, the town
looks like a space. Only there is farmland on one side; beside it, a long river
is meandering parallel. Moreover
, there is a factory on another side of the town
in one corner.
According to
the proposal, the river
will be bifurcated by a road that is
extended from a circular road present in the heart of the town
. In addition
to it, various new buildings will be constructed near a river
. A retail district will be opened tangentially to the circular pathway, a school will exist in the north, and there will be a playground near the school and in between the road and river
. Finally
, the factory area will be converted into a residential zone.Submitted by sh.mariakhan on
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