The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In
this
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chart
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, we see where the different proportions of
oil
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ressources
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resources
coming from the whole
world
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, are
keepted
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kept
in different areas. On the one hand, we can see that the left part of the
chart
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is the
pourcentages
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percentage
percentages
of total
world
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oil
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ressources
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resources
.
Firstly
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, the main place where the
world
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oil
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is held, is in the Middle East, with
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56.52% of preserved
oil
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.
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Additionally
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the second country with the most held
oil
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is Canada.
However
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, after Canada, all the
others
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other
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countries and continents have
les
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less
than 10% of
oil
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.
On the other hand
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,
in
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on
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the right side of the
chart
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, we have the
pourcentage
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percentage
of total
world
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annual
oil
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consumption. Indeed, Asia and the United States are the two places in the
world
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where
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oil
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consumption is high.
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, the rest of
places
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the places
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except Western Europe with
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19.24%, have less than a 10% of the use of
oil
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.
To conclude
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,
this
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chart
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allowed us to see the places with the most
oil
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consumtions
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consumptions
consumption
annualy
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annually
but
also
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where it is the most held.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, oil, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportions" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • resources
  • consumption
  • annually
  • regions
  • disparity
  • consumption rates
  • high/low resources
  • global market dynamics
  • geopolitical relations
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