The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the proportion of a survey that visitor travels by using the airport with each purpose of their trip through different months in 2002. It could be seen that the four purposes of their trip fluctuated
however
other purposes opposited.
Besides
, business was the highest percentage. The trip business accounted for the highest proportion in March 2002 around 73%,
however
, it fluctuated from June 2002 to December 2002.
While
other trips reached the lowest figure in four different months in 2002,
however
, it tent to increase from 3% to 5%. The rest of the trips was
holiday
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a holiday
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and visiting family was the same trend with
the
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fluctuating. March 2002 accounted for respectively around 18% and 6% in holidays and visiting family.
Then
It went to 35% and 26% respectively in the
last
year 2002.
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