The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of participation in the three different
activities
in a UK sports
club for over 20 years from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
, the rate
of enrolment for swimming declined over the period, whereas
the figure for gym activities
increased. In the case of team sports
activity, the rate
was almost the same.
With regards to participation in swimming activities
, it stood at 50% in the first year, which made it the most popular activity among the sports
club members. However
, the rate
dropped significantly to less than a quarter (23%) in 2015.
On the other hand
, gym activities
were the least popular activities
among the members in 1995, but a few years later, the rate
increased dramatically to reach 28% in 2015. Similarly
, when it comes to team sports
activities
, the number of members was 32% in 1995, but after a few years, the rate
fluctuated between 40% and 30%.Submitted by s_syedy on
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