The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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of

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should be an extremely important goal of

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. I think there are various fields for

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to concentrate

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are as important as the

lives

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of

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. So, I somewhat disagree and agree with

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statement. On the one hand, we can live a smooth and peaceful life with the help of

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. It made our life like a

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walking

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in a park. Nowadays, most of the scientific activities are directed to the life improvements of the

people

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.

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, there are certain

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that something harmful

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people

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can not be done using scientific methods. On top of that, mass can travel beyond the earth to explore something assistive for mankind. It seems like all the scientific activities are running only to develop the

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lives

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,

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works for other creatures as well. Though other creatures are not the first priority

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they demand

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proportion of attention from the world of

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,

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, the important things for the

people

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, like - the earth, water, food, environment

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soil etc. are

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important factors to look

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Actually, the other things are perhaps connected with

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but they should be researched to keep in that way they should be. If

science

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want

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to aim to the

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totally, the other factors will be ignored and cause

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great harm

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living

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. Those should be cared

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like

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human beings.

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, I must confess that the most important aim of

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should not be only to improve

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to take care of other factors and matters for which

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can live and stay in a sound world. Damaged

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and spaces will not be able to offer something valuable to

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to think about only the inclinement of mass' happy

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