The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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that

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the development

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of

people

's

lives

should be an extremely important goal of

science

. I think there are various fields for

science

to concentrate

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are as important as the

lives

of

people

. So, I somewhat disagree and agree with

this

statement. On the one hand, we can live a smooth and peaceful life with the help of

science

. It made our life like a

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walking

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in a park. Nowadays, most of the scientific activities are directed to the life improvements of the

people

.

Besides

, there are certain

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and

order

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that something harmful

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people

can not be done using scientific methods. On top of that, mass can travel beyond the earth to explore something assistive for mankind. It seems like all the scientific activities are running only to develop the

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lives

.

On the other hand

,

science

works for other creatures as well. Though other creatures are not the first priority

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they demand

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proportion of attention from the world of

science

,

Additionally

, the important things for the

people

, like - the earth, water, food, environment

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soil etc. are

also

important factors to look

.

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Actually, the other things are perhaps connected with

people

's

lives

but they should be researched to keep in that way they should be. If

science

want

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to aim to the

people

's

lives

totally, the other factors will be ignored and cause

a

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great harm

for

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living

people

. Those should be cared

equally

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for equally

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like

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human beings.

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last

, I must confess that the most important aim of

science

should not be only to improve

people

's

lives

but

also

to take care of other factors and matters for which

people

can live and stay in a sound world. Damaged

environment

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environments

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and spaces will not be able to offer something valuable to

science

to think about only the inclinement of mass' happy

lives

.