The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The bar graph illustrates, the total number of non-profitable working hours finished by humans in a period of one week
such
as gardening, household chores and childcaring in the homes.
In overview, both females and males which
are not single are doing jobs without Correct pronoun usage
who
recieving
money to support their families.First of all, women with three or more infants Correct your spelling
receiving
reaching
the highest number of about 60 and they are giving care to their children, working in Wrong verb form
reach
house
and in Add an article
the house
garden
.Add an article
the garden
Moreover
, lowest
population of married Add an article
the lowest
woman
does not have kids with a maximum position of 30 and they are not working much since they don't have Fix the agreement mistake
women
Add an article
a child
child
to take care of.
To add on, all men with wives are workers, Fix the agreement mistake
children
either
they have toddlers or not and their Correct word choice
whether
family
remain steady and it's just below 20.In comparison, Fix the agreement mistake
families
woman
has Add an article
a woman
the woman
largest
number as compared to man, Change the article
the largest
therefore
more wives are practicing
all duties to keep up Change the spelling
practising
their
children.All three families experienced Change preposition
with their
flactuations
in all working activities.Correct your spelling
fluctuations
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