The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The map compares Harton
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2000 to 2009 and represents the changes made.
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, the town was transformed from a residential area with local facilities to a more commercial city with a modern setup; a larger industrial outlet, a smaller space for the natural woodlands , schools, a higher institution,
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corner and a car park. As for the natural resources, the lake was replaced with a smaller body of water and the area with trees and greenery
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was made smaller
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the line of houses which was located to the South of the river to create more space for expansion of the industries. To the West of Lakeside,the warehouses and an ancient town were demolished to serve more space for parking
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cars and official
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respectively. The educational sector comprised
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a larger community with more schools and the establishment of
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higher
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which were directly next to each other.
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, because of the erection of a movie theatre, the arts centre was demolished and
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line of shops emerged to replace the residential area.
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