The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The map compares Harton
in
2000 to 2009 and represents the changes made.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the town was transformed from a residential area with local facilities to a more commercial city with a modern setup; a larger industrial outlet, a smaller space for the natural woodlands , schools, a higher institution, Linking Words
shopping
corner and a car park.
As for the natural resources, the lake was replaced with a smaller body of water and the area with trees and greeneryCorrect article usage
a shopping
and
was made smaller Correct word choice
apply
together with
the line of houses which was located to the South of the river to create more space for expansion of the industries.
To the West of Lakeside,the warehouses and an ancient town were demolished to serve more space for parking Linking Words
of
cars and official Change preposition
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complex
respectively. The educational sector comprised Fix the agreement mistake
complexes
of
a larger community with more schools and the establishment of Change preposition
apply
a
higher Correct article usage
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institution
which were directly next to each other. Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
Similarly
, because of the erection of a movie theatre, the arts centre was demolished and Linking Words
the
line of shops emerged to replace the residential area.Correct article usage
a
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