The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the current layout of the University
Sports
Centre
and the plan for future redevelopment.
Overall
, some areas will be demolished and replaced by many additional facilities in the redevelopment plan. In the current layout, at the
centre
of the University
Sports
Centre
is a pool, which is surrounded by a changing room, gym, seating, and reception. In the redevelopment plan, the gym will be extended to the east about twice
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the current size. To the east of the entrance, a café will be added,
while
on the west
side
of it, a
sports
shop will be constructed.
On the other hand
, the outdoor courts that are now located on the east
side
of the
Centre
will be demolished and changed into a
sports
hall in the future.
In addition
, two dance studios will be built on the east
side
of the
sports
hall, and a changing room will be added on the southeast
side
of the
sports
hall, next to the café. Meanwhile, the outdoor courts on the west
side
of the
centre
will be replaced by a Leisure pool in the future with the changing room on the south
side
of it, next to the
sports
shop.
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