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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table shows the number of people
how
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now
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 living in Argentina,
Indonesia
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, Italy and
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea between 2003, 2025 and 2050. It is clear from the
grap
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graph
grape
 that the
population
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 of Argentina and
Indonesia
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were
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apply
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increse
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increase
increased
 during the years, but Italy was
reverse
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the reverse
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.
Acoording
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According
 to what is shown, the majority of
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population
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the population
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 was in
Indonesia
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by
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apply
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238
millions
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million
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 in 2003
then
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, it rose
teeply
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steeply
deeply
 to 274
milion
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million
 and 312
million
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 in 2025 and 2050.
On the other hand
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, Argentina in 2003
has
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had
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 34
million
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 people after that they improved gradually to 48 and 62
million
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 between 2025 and 2050.
While
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,
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apply
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 in 2003 in Italy
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population
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the population
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 was
decrease
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decreased
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 slowly over the years.
However
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,
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea remain stable
though
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through
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 2025 and 2050
aroud
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around
 52
million
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 people.
To sum up
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, we could say that
the
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apply
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Indonesia
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 has
highest
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the highest
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population
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 over the years.
Whereas
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,
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea remain constant during 2025 and 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, population, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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