The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

table shows the number of people

how

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now

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living in Argentina,

Indonesia

, Italy and

Republic

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the Republic

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of Korea between 2003, 2025 and 2050. It is clear from the

grap

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graph

grape

that the

population

of Argentina and

Indonesia

were

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apply

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increse

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increase

increased

during the years, but Italy was

reverse

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the reverse

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Acoording

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According

to what is shown, the majority of

population

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the population

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was in

Indonesia

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apply

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238

millions

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million

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in 2003

then

, it rose

teeply

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steeply

deeply

to 274

milion

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million

and 312

million

in 2025 and 2050.

On the other hand

, Argentina in 2003

has

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had

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million

people after that they improved gradually to 48 and 62

million

between 2025 and 2050.

While

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apply

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in 2003 in Italy

population

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the population

show examples

was

decrease

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decreased

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slowly over the years.

However

Republic

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the Republic

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of Korea remain stable

though

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through

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2025 and 2050

aroud

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around

million

people.

To sum up

, we could say that

the

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apply

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Indonesia

has

highest

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the highest

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population

over the years.

Whereas

Republic

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the Republic

show examples

of Korea remain constant during 2025 and 2050.

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