You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The map illustrates
the
Brandfield Correct article usage
apply
city
's image where city
planners want to develop a shopping mall
in the area which have
two Correct subject-verb agreement
has
sites option
that have been proposed. Fix the agreement mistake
site options
Overall
, the city
consists of golf areas, housing estates, industrial estates and city
Correct article usage
the city
center
where the first site option to build the Change the spelling
centre
mall
is located near to
housing estates Change preposition
apply
while
the second site is among Add an article
the center
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
city
and industial
places.
Both sites have Correct your spelling
industrial
the
advantages and disadvantages to Correct article usage
apply
build
the shopping Wrong verb form
building
mall
, whether it is near to
the house properties or the core of the Change preposition
apply
city
. The reasons why it is good to close
to the private properties are because it will be easier for people who live in the Add a missing verb
be close
residental
to buy their daily things so the Correct your spelling
residential
mall
already have
its regular visitors. Change the verb form
has
However
, if the mall
is located there, it is not accessable
for Correct your spelling
accessible
another
visitors who live in another place Correct quantifier usage
other
that is
far from the mall
. In addition
, it is near to the river which will affecting
the environment by producing chemical Change the verb form
affect
be affecting
polution
to the river.
The second site is located in the core of the Correct your spelling
pollution
city
which will be good for all the people who usually visit the city
center
to have Change the spelling
centre
one stop
shopping Add a hyphen
one-stop
center
area that Change the spelling
centre
also
near Add a missing verb
is also
to
industrial places which can be beneficial for people who work there to enjoy shopping after experiencing an exhausted day of work.Change preposition
apply
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