There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, Describe the construction Explain why the construction is a problem for you Say what you would like them to do about it You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing
letter to you to inform you of some problems that are linked to a new project of the council of Kermanshah District 8 where a new noise has been a bad nuisance for all neighbours.
, I should say that for the
noise has been annoying us until 10 p.m. As you know, in the
election of the city council we had a lot of discussions about calmness and the atmosphere of the community.
In addition
, the main problem for some families was that they wanted to live in a suitable environment both on weekdays and weekends. I strongly believe that our city where a lot of tourists feel integrity and calmness in its memories, will be improving many stuff until 2025.
At the end
I would like to express my comment on
topic about our city: we are a unique family who anything of us is related to another's life. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Raman Ramin
Submitted by Ramin1991 on

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coherence cohesion
The letter does not effectively address the task's requirements and is off-topic at times. It lacks clarity and coherence in connecting the ideas, resulting in a confusing overall structure.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are inconsistent and lack formality. The use of "Dear Sir/Madam" lacks punctuation, while the closing phrase "I look forward to hearing from you soon" lacks appropriate formality and politeness.
lexical resource
The letter lacks precision in vocabulary and tends to be repetitive. It is important to use a wider range of vocabulary and expressions to convey ideas effectively and accurately.
grammatical range
The letter contains several grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb tenses, missing articles, and word order issues. There is also a lack of complexity and variety in sentence structures, impacting the overall clarity and coherence of the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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