The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below illustrates us percentage of total spending money among of their
ages
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in the UK in 2004.
Overall
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, people from
ages
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61 to 75 spend similar money on entertainment, as a group
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over 76 spend on food and drink. It was the highest spending at that time. Meanwhile, the lowest one was restaurants and hotels for
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61 to 75. The percentage of restaurants and hotels was the same for the public at
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30 to 60 in 3 different groups. After their count has rocketly fallen to approximately 3% and rose to just over 5% in
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over 76. Food and drink were slightly increased without decreasing. Begin at age under 30 with over 5%,
at the end
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they accounted for nearly 23% at age 76 and more. Entertainment percentage fluctuated, they glowed up to 23% in 4 different groups, and after that, they glowed down at the age of over 76 and calculated at about 14%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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