The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of the support they received from employers.
The first bar graph illustrates 2 main reasons
of
the students in different Change preposition
for
age
groups which the reported reasons are for career and for interest. In addition
, the second bar chart depicts the amount of employers
support they acquired which is Fix the agreement mistake
employer
also
represented in age
groups.
Overall
, the number
of students studying for career
gradually decreases as they are getting older. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
In contrast
, the percentage of adults who are studying owing to interest continuously increases as they are aging
.
Wrong verb form
age
Initially
, the percentage of the
individuals who are under 26 is 80 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
; nonetheless
, this
number
has dropped until it reaches approximately 19% in the last
report age
group
which is over 49 years old. On the other hand
, the number
of adults who are interested in the course is 10 per cent
in the first age
group
, and it gradually rises to 70 per cent
in people who are above 49 years old. Additionally
, in people who are between 40 to 49, both reasons have the same percentage at around 40%.
Among the reported year group
, individuals who are below 26 years old are assisted the most at around 74 per cent
. However
, this
number
decreases in 26
to 29 Correct article usage
the 26
age
group
and even more in 30
to 39 at around 35% which is the lowest point. In Correct article usage
the 30
last
2 year groups, Correct article usage
the last
this
number
respectively increases
ending up Wrong verb form
increased
with
45%.Change preposition
at
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