The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The plans illustrate the structure of the
southwest
airport in recent times and the development next year.
Capitalize word
Southwest
Overall
, a
plan Correct article usage
the
of
the airport will be larger than at present and will Change preposition
for
be
more facilities, including shops, atm, sky train, bag drop and car hire.
At present, there Verb problem
have
are
an entrance and exit Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Change preposition
for
of
Change preposition
for
depaartures
and Correct your spelling
departures
departure
arrivals
at the front. Coming from a departures
entrance, the passengers will see Fix the agreement mistake
departure
check-in
counter and café, after that people need to Correct article usage
a check-in
passing
through passport control and security. Change the verb
pass
Next,
there is a concourse which includes a walkway. From arrivals
, people need to go to passport control and customs and exit and the arrivals
door.
In the next year, the plan will expand the concourse and a walkway will be replaced by a sky train. In addition
, additional café, atm and car hire will be added in
the Change preposition
to
arrivals
site. In terms of departure
site, there Correct article usage
the departure
are
a new bag drop zone Change the verb form
is
which
near a café and shops before a concourse.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words arrivals with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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