The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans illustrate the structure of the
southwest
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Southwest
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airport in recent times and the development next year.
Overall
,
a
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the
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plan
of
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for
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the airport will be larger than at present and will
be
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have
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more facilities, including shops, atm, sky train, bag drop and car hire. At present, there
are
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is
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an entrance and exit
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for
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of
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for
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depaartures
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departures
departure
and
arrivals
at the front. Coming from a
departures
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departure
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entrance, the passengers will see
check-in
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a check-in
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counter and café, after that people need to
passing
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pass
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through passport control and security.
Next,
there is a concourse which includes a walkway. From
arrivals
, people need to go to passport control and customs and exit and the
arrivals
door. In the next year, the plan will expand the concourse and a walkway will be replaced by a sky train.
In addition
, additional café, atm and car hire will be added
in
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to
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the
arrivals
site. In terms of
departure
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the departure
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site, there
are
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is
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a new bag drop zone
which
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apply
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near a café and shops before a concourse.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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