The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where it is relevant
The images illustrate the plan for expanding the
school
site for two decades Use synonyms
counting
from 2004. At Verb problem
starting
a
first glance, the most expanding site will happen in the most eastern area; Correct article usage
apply
hence
the Linking Words
school
is predicted to be able to admit more students significantly.
Turning into details, the facilities Use synonyms
that
Linking Words
is
planned to be erected will be Change the verb form
are
School
Building 3, which will be located Use synonyms
to
the end of Change preposition
at
existing
path. Just the next of it, Add an article
the existing
Use synonyms
school
has decided to have another parking facility. Since the new parking site is far behind the main entrance, a road connecting Add an article
the school
from
the main entrance to the facility will be built.
Apart from the addition, some sites will still remain the same with Change preposition
apply
just
only small tweaks. The existing Rephrase
apply
school
landmarks will be connected, which will cut the pathway efficiently. The existing car park will be maintained Use synonyms
to be
at the place. Verb problem
apply
Lastly
, the Linking Words
sport
field will be cut down approximately one-third the sizeChange the noun form
sports
,
and moved to the southern of the new parking facility.Remove the comma
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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