The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two line charts illustrating the changes in the proportion of households with three types of electrical appliances and the time spent on housework each week in a country.
The percentage of houses having these three appliances all witnessed an upward trend. In spite of some fluctuation, there was an increase in the scale of washing machines, rising from 40% in 1920 to 71% in 2019.
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, a significant growth could be seen in the ratio of refrigerators, increasing from 0% in 1920 to 100% in 1980, and Linking Words
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the figure for washing machines in 1940, before remaining constant until 2019.
Similar to the refrigerator, the percentage of vacuum cleaners Wrong verb form
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showed an enormous rise, from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2019. In terms of the number of Linking Words
hours
of housework per week, after declining from 50 Use synonyms
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in 1920 to 18 Use synonyms
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in 1980, Use synonyms
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figure basically kept plateau at 15 Linking Words
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, in the years between 1920 and 2019, more and more homes have these three electrical appliances and spend fewer Linking Words
hours
on routine housework.Use synonyms
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