The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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In the present day,
computers
are an important tool to help almost everyone in the world to do many things such
as studying at home, going online to meet new friends, enjoying online movies etc. These
graphs above explain information about Correct determiner usage
The
computer
ownership
in
between 2002 and 2010 Change preposition
apply
include
Wrong verb form
including
percentage
of Add an article
a percentage
the percentage
computer
ownership
and impact
of Correct article usage
the impact
computers
to
education Change preposition
on
about
that time.
Change preposition
at
In the
first Change preposition
The
graph
that
explains the percentage of Correct pronoun usage
apply
computer
ownership
from 2002 to 2010. This
graph
is constantly increasing about
5 Change preposition
by about
percent
per year. Change the spelling
per cent
In
2002 to 2010, Change preposition
From
this
percentage of graph
explains 55, 60, 65, 70 and 75 Correct article usage
the graph
percent
in sequence. Meaning
that many Wrong verb form
This means
people
must use computers
in their life
more than before.
In the second Fix the agreement mistake
lives
graph
, it explains that people
in 2010 owned computers
more than in 2002. The graph
shows that people
in college (incomplete) are the highest percent
of differentiation but in postgraduate is the lowest Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of differentiation.
In summary, these Change the spelling
per cent
overall
graphs show that computer
ownership
is
Verb problem
has
increasing
Wrong verb form
increased
along
that time and in studying Change preposition
over
people
are more
increasing than working Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
. That implies the computer
is a fundamental tool of education.Submitted by writersdiary101 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computers, computer, ownership, graph, percent, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "explain" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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