The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010.
The graph given below represents the proportion of men and women faculties in different types of institutions in 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of
female
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teacher
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was higher in 3 types of
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institutions
, namely, Nursery
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, Primary
School
and Secondary
School
,
while
, the
ratio
of men to women
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in College was equal.
Furthermore
, the percentage of Male
teachers
in Private training institutes and Universities was higher than female
teachers
.
Firstly
, in Nursery, Primary and
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Secondary
school
percentage of
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teacher
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was 97%, 95%, and 57% , respectively. The
ratio
of male
teachers
in
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schools was 5%, 7%, and 48%, respectively. The graph
clears
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demonstrates that the number of female
teachers
were
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much higher than male
teachers
in Schools.
Moreover
, in College
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the percentage
of male
teachers
was equivalent to the number of female
teachers
, i.e, 50%. In Private training institutes and Universities in 2010, the
ratio
of male
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was dominating the
ratio
of female
teachers
. In Private Training Institutes, there were 55% men and 45% women
teachers
,
whereas
, in
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70% were male faculty and
remaining
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30% were female faculty.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational settings
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • further education
  • higher education
  • adult education
  • specialist education
  • dominance
  • balanced ratio
  • non-traditional roles
  • trends
  • percentage
  • male teachers
  • female teachers
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • statistical data
  • demographics
  • workforce composition
  • gender disparities
  • graph interpretation
  • educational workforce
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