Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live Write an email to your friend. In your email 1)Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2)Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3)Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any address Begin your letter as follows Dear,
#friend #place #course #university #advice #email #student #accommodation #mistakes #students #address
Dear Sarah,
It has been a long time since
seen
each other . I am Verb problem
we saw
gald
things are working out for you and I am extremely proud of you to hear that from you , you got admission at Correct your spelling
glad
previous
university and it is my pleasure to guide you Correct pronoun usage
your previous
for
Change preposition
on
this
journey.
Initially
, when I was in the university I lived in campus
accommodation it was convenient to
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for
my
to reach Correct pronoun usage
me
to
the course easily it took Change preposition
apply
by
walk maximumChange preposition
apply
3
minutes
benefits of living in Change preposition
of 3
campus
accommodation is
you will live alone all students live Change the verb form
are
separate
rooms with restrooms Change preposition
in separate
in addition
, kitchens
Correct word choice
and kitchens
is
Change the verb form
are
sharing
with students.
I lived off-Wrong verb form
shared
campus
once it was very inconvenient to my
Correct pronoun usage
me
due to
there was not transportauion service I took a taki instead
therfore
I would Correct your spelling
therefore
to
recommend Fix the infinitive
apply
to
you Change preposition
that
to
stay in Fix the infinitive
apply
campus
accommodation.
I would love to inform you that do not believe advertising on social media they are lie
to us if you want to live out Change the verb form
are lying
the
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of the
campus
there is application
you can find it online.
I am fully aware you will enjoy your time with the course you will gain lots of experiences and experiments if you have any enquirers please contact me .
Yours faithfully ,Add an article
the application
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Greeting and Closing
The email should begin with a proper greeting, such as 'Dear Sarah,' and end with a suitable closing, such as 'Best wishes' or 'Kind regards,' followed by the writer's name.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Ensure each paragraph presents a single idea clearly and transition smoothly between paragraphs.
Complete Response
The response must address all parts of the task with adequate detail and appropriate tone, while also ensuring the purpose of the email is clear.
Logical Structure
To foster coherence, use linking words appropriately and organize the email into clear logical segments.
Suitable Writing Tone
Adopt a tone that is consistently appropriate for the context of an advice-giving email to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,