The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The data below demonstrates the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, the map in the modern day has changed a lot compared to the old one. Many buildings were destroyed and replaced with new areas.
It is clear that
the farmlands were converted into house areas as a large number of
houses
were constructed.
furthermore
, more
houses
were
also
built alongside the main road. Many short roads are pathed surrounded by
houses
. The shops were gone and the post office still remained in the centre of the map opposite the primary school unchanged. From the map, the primary school were expanded and added two new buildings on the left and right of the school. The gardens and the large house were turned into the retirement home which section is half a size smaller than the gardens and
has
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a pathway leading from the huge square of
houses
to it.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • aerial perspective
  • land use
  • agricultural land
  • rural
  • urban development
  • housing estate
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • business park
  • shopping center
  • infrastructure
  • construct
  • roundabout
  • disappearance
  • green spaces
  • complexity
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • modernization
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