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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing in reference to the advertised position of part-time librarian over summer break. My name is Vivian. I am doing a Bachelor of Education at Saigon University. Currently, I am a primary teacher who has been working in an international school for 10 years. I am a bilingual teacher who can speak English and Vietnamese. Reading
books
 is my favourite activity because reading leads me all over the world. I usually spend thirty minutes reading before bedtime. Before becoming a full-time teacher, I had a half timetable to work in the school library. My key responsibilities related to checking
books
 in and checking
books
 out, arranging
books
 on shelves in order.
Therefore
, I am confident that I can work effectively in a school library.
This
 summer, I will have 9 weeks to be off from my work.
This
 time will be really boring for me to stay at home without doing anything.
As a result
, I think a library helper will be an interesting job for me to do during the summer holiday. I can be involved in the
books
as well as
 earn more money. If you need
further
 information about me, kindly contact me via
this
 email address. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Van
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task achievement
Ensure that your introduction is brief and that it specifically states your interest in applying for the job.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain coherence by clearly organizing ideas and using appropriate transition words.
lexical resource
Vary your sentence structures to demonstrate a wide range of grammar.
grammatical range and accuracy
Use more complex sentence structures and a range of grammatical forms.
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