The following graphs show money spent on retaurant meals and home cooking and the number of meals per year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where revelent.
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The pie chart and the line graph reveal the
percentage
of food
budget spent on restaurant
meals
, home cooking and the number of meals
per year. The data is calibrated in percentage
.
From an overall
perspective, a dramatic increase is observed in the number of meals
families
eat at restaurants
. The percentage
of the family's food
budget spent on restaurant
meals
steadily climbed. Just 10 percent
of the food
budget was spent on restaurant
meals
in 1970, and 15 percent
in 1980. That percentage
more than doubled in 1990, to 35 percent
, and rose again in 2000 to 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Stating Change the spelling
per cent
further
, In 1970, families
ate the same number of meals
at fast food
and sit-down restaurants
. In 1980, families
ate slightly more frequently at sit-down restaurants
. However
, since 1990, fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
restaurants
serve
more Wrong verb form
have served
meals
to the
Correct article usage
apply
families
than do
Unnecessary verb
apply
the
sit-down Correct article usage
apply
restaurants
. In 2000 the percentage
of fast food
meals
reached the pinnacle at almost 90% while
the percentage
for sitdown restaurant
meals
was approximately half.
Overall
, fast food
meals
and sitdown
Correct your spelling
sit-down
restaurant
meals
eventually started at the same percentage
but within 30 years, fast food
meals
' percentage
surpassed its counterpart's to reach the pinnacle.Submitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on
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