You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter ro the singer. In your letter . say how you feel about his performance . give details of your musical activities . explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Arijit Singh, I, Urvashi Bhavsar, health for all the time and I hope you will entertain us with your amazing voice and
one
of your biggest fan
. I hope Fix the agreement mistake
fans
this
letter find
you in great health. I am writing Change the verb form
finds
this
letter to express my joy and happiness, while
I attended your annual musical concert
last
Saturday in Ahmedabad. I waited for your concert
since the day I saw Correct article usage
the post
post
on your Correct article usage
the post
instagram
account. I booked my ticket on the spot.The evening of the Change the capitalization
Instagram
the
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apply
concert
was one
of the memorable
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most memorable
evening
for me and I will Change to a plural noun
evenings
cherished
that forever. The most amazing thing about the Change the verb form
cherish
concert
was your extra ordinary
voice and I couldn't handle myself without dancing Correct your spelling
extraordinary
with
every Change preposition
to
songs
. I believe Change to a singular noun
song
this
one
is one
of the best live performances due to
rocking
band music, energetic sound systems and crazy aura from the Correct article usage
the rocking
audiences
. I would like to share my musical interest with you Fix the agreement mistake
audience
also
. I have a group of friends and we together
make Rephrase
apply
songs
by writing to compose music everything
. If you don't mind I will share my new upcoming Change preposition
for everything
songs
that I compose
by our team and I Would like yup to give some feedback about the song and music. I know it sounds crazy but if you can read my letter and give me Wrong verb form
composed
response
to sing a song for our band will Add an article
a response
the response
the life long
dream come true moments for all of us. Your forever loyal fan and Replace the word
be a lifelong
well wisher
. I would like you to wish the bestAdd a hyphen
well-wisher
Change preposition
of
songs
forever. Best regards, UrvashiSubmitted by bhavsar.urvashi on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter has a clear introduction, well-structured main body paragraphs, and a concise conclusion to improve logical structure. Use paragraphing effectively to group related ideas together.
coherence cohesion
Include a proper salutation at the beginning and a suitable closing at the end of your letter to improve the scores for greeting and closing.
coherence cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph and use linking words to connect paragraphs and sentences for a more coherent flow of ideas.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail for each point. Ensure that what you write is directly relevant to the set questions.
task achievement
Make sure your tone is consistent and appropriate throughout the letter, reflecting the formality level of the task.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
