The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration provided displays the process by which
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
, is a 9 stage
, man-made and circular process, in which some machines are used for several stages, it starts with individuals throwing Add a hyphen
9-stage
bottles
and ends with new products.
To begin
, individuals will throw plastic
bottles
in the correct recycling container. The trash truck will take all the plastic
in the container to the recycling center
, where people will start selecting the Change the spelling
centre
bottles
that can be recycled and throwing away those that can't be used. At this
point, plastic
bottles
will be compressed into blocks.
The next step is
to place the plastic
bottle blocks into the crashing machine, so the plastic
are
cut Change the verb form
is
in
small pieces. Once crushed they are washed and passed through another specialized machine, which produces Change preposition
into
plastic
pellets. The pellets need to be heated so they can be converted into raw material. Following
this
, the raw material
are organized and used to produce new products, Fix the agreement mistake
materials
such
as t-shirts, bags, bottles
and pencils and then
, the cycle begins again.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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