The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration provided displays the process by which
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
, is a
9 stage
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, man-made and circular process, in which some machines are used for several stages, it starts with individuals throwing
bottles
and ends with new products.
To begin
, individuals will throw
plastic
bottles
in the correct recycling container. The trash truck will take all the
plastic
in the container to the recycling
center
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, where people will start selecting the
bottles
that can be recycled and throwing away those that can't be used. At
this
point,
plastic
bottles
will be compressed into blocks.
The next step is
to place the
plastic
bottle blocks into the crashing machine, so the
plastic
are
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cut
in
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into
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small pieces. Once crushed they are washed and passed through another specialized machine, which produces
plastic
pellets. The pellets need to be heated so they can be converted into raw material.
Following
this
, the raw
material
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materials
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are organized and used to produce new products,
such
as t-shirts, bags,
bottles
and pencils and
then
, the cycle begins again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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