The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph compares forecasted world illiteracy rates by male and female in six areas for the
last
year, measured in percentage. Linking Words
Overall
, the figures of illiterate women were higher than men in all regions, predominantly in Arab states and South Linking Words
Asia
nations.
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Asia
had the largest percentage of the population with no reading and writing abilities, dominated by females at approximately 55% Use synonyms
while
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the
males accounted for 35%. Correct article usage
apply
On the contrary
, developed countries, barely above par Linking Words
both
genders, recorded the lowest statistics. In between those regions, ordered from the biggest to the least figure, were Arab States, Sub-Saharan Africa, East Change preposition
for both
Asia
, and Latin Use synonyms
American
. Illiterate women in the first two areas mentioned were beyond 45%, Correct your spelling
America
while
the rest were between 10 to 20%.
The percentages of men who cannot read or write were lower than women, topped with South Linking Words
Asia
, followed by Sub-Saharan Africa at merely above 30 and Arab states at barely below that number. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the least illiterate male population were in Linking Words
Caribbean
at precisely 10 and Oceania at roughly below that figureCorrect article usage
the Caribbean
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