Some concerned parties
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that there should be
on some dangerous
sports
while
otherFix the agreement mistake
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that people should have their own choice to play any game whichever they like.
This
essay will
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both views and give my own opinion.
Talking about
sports
, they play
anChange the article
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vital role in every person's life from childhood to adulthood.
NumberChange the article
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of students in their school days choose some
sports
as their profession by playing different types of games and ending up
one as their passion. They pursue
this
as
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and try to
their dream through their
games. These
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choices intrinsic them to more
and
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their future rather than wasting their time
inChange preposition
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clueless aims.
Moreover
, folks can learn various skills number of
sports
and become physically fit.
Therefore
, having
chanceAdd an article
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to play various
sports
can build
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physical
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and help them to be specific about what they like or not.
On the other side, some activities are harmful for students like bullfighting, mountain racing, motorbike stunting,
rallyCorrect word choice
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racing which can take
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lifeFix the agreement mistake
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. they are harmful
forChange the preposition
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both physical
as well as
mental health.
For instance
,
last
year in Japan more than
dozenCorrect article usage
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of participants and
died during rally racing
due to
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stunt
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racerCorrect article usage
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.
Thus
, higher
should implement some
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on some
life threateningAdd a hyphen
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activities.
To conclude
, I
beliveCorrect your spelling
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that youngsters should have
freedomAdd an article
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to do any activity alongside some rules and
regulationFix the agreement mistake
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to follow.
However
,
have all their
to avoid worse
incidentFix the agreement mistake
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to happenChange preposition
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by playing rough
sports
.