The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table outlines the percentage of the salary of a household, which is spent on feeding , rent , clothes and entertainment in five countries.
Overall
,
majority
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of the houses in other countries spent the most on housing with Turkey and Spain making an exception as it is noticed that families spend most on feeding
similarly
, fewer homes exhausted cost
on
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entertaining themselves and ornaments. When it came to the expenditure
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French , German and British homes ; housing (31%, 33% and 37% respectively)
while
more of the income in the UK (27%)was spent on food and drinks than in Germany (22%) and France (25%) alike there seemed to be the least attention paid on ornaments in all three nations with the former at 11%% and the
last
two spending only 7 and 15% of their monthly returns.
Furthermore
, as for the Turkish and Spanish , a bulk proportion of their money went into their nutritional costs at 26 and 31% respectively , leaving only 20% and 18% for their savings on rental costs on the brighter side, at least they knew better to exhaust even less on
fun
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; Turkey 10%, Spain 15% which left almost half the same proportion for garments of the body in both nations.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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