The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The bar chart illustrates the details of British
people
who provide money to
charity
by
age
in the years between 1990 to 2010 in percentage.
Overall
, the majority of
charity
is given by the middle-aged group
while
the minimum percentage of help is provided by the teenage group
people
in both years. In 1990, the lowest percentage of help was given by the 18-25
age
group which was around 18%
while
the highest
amount
of
people
between
ages
Correct article usage
the ages
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of 36 to 50 provided about 45%.
However
, a significant
amount
is given from
age
groups 51-65 and 65 plus around 35% and 32% respectively.
Whereas
, very lowest
amount
recorded in the year 2010 around 5% from teenage
people
but other community
charity
was much higher than them. From
age
51 to 65 individuals lend almost 40% to
charity
which is highest
this
year and the remaining middle and elder persons are given the same
amount
approximately 35%
while
age
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ages
show examples
between 26 to 35 given about 32% in the same year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, charity, age, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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