The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)

The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)
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This
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graph illustrates the proportion of families owning 4 types of high-tech devices over 20 years.
Overall
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, all types of devices witness an upward trend.
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MP 3 players accounted for / the highest rate, the opposite could be seen in
tablets
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. Starting at 10%, the households owning MP3 and mobile phones were the lowest, 10% lower than the highest. Both figures surpassed
tablets
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at 18% in 1995 and 27% in 2000 respectively.
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considerable growth was witnessed in MP3, smartphones increased slowly over 2 decades and both both became the most popular devices with 98%
at the end
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of the observed period. Accounting for 18%,
tablets
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took the lion's share in 1995, followed by music players and mobile phones.
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figure experienced a gradual climb from 18% to 40% in 2015. Strikingly, since being introduced in 2003, computers rocketed, surpassed
tablets
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at 35% in 2007
then
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grew continuously to 80% from 2005 to 2015 after a 10% rise over the first two years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tablets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • ownership percentages
  • electronic devices
  • 20-year period
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • detailed comparison
  • highest ownership rates
  • dramatic changes
  • potential reasons
  • trends
  • shifts
  • insights
  • implications
  • future device ownership patterns
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