The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration provided displays the steps of the
process
by which instant Use synonyms
noodles
are produced and packaged.
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Overall
, Linking Words
this
is a multi-stage, man-made Linking Words
process
that begins with obtaining flour and ends with the packaging of the instant Use synonyms
noodles
.
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To begin
, flour is stored in the storage silos, so trucks need to go there and transport the Linking Words
fluor
to the Correct your spelling
flour
process
. The Use synonyms
process
begins with mixing water, oil and flour, and Use synonyms
then
, they are placed on rollers so the mass obtained can be carried to the following Linking Words
pocesses
. After all ingredients are mixed, the rollers will transform the mass into dough sheets and Correct your spelling
processes
then
into dough strips, so they have the shape of Linking Words
noodles
.
At Use synonyms
this
point, the strips are put on circular discs and they are cooked with oil, when it is done, Linking Words
the
are dried. Once the Correct your spelling
they
noodles
are dried, they are put into cups with vegetable and spices packets and Use synonyms
Linking Words
finally
they are labelled and sealed.Add a comma
finally,
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