The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration provided displays the steps of the
process
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by which instant
noodles
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are produced and packaged.
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,
this
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is a multi-stage, man-made
process
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that begins with obtaining flour and ends with the packaging of the instant
noodles
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.
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, flour is stored in the storage silos, so trucks need to go there and transport the
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flour
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to the
process
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. The
process
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begins with mixing water, oil and flour, and
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, they are placed on rollers so the mass obtained can be carried to the following
pocesses
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processes
. After all ingredients are mixed, the rollers will transform the mass into dough sheets and
then
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into dough strips, so they have the shape of
noodles
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. At
this
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point, the strips are put on circular discs and they are cooked with oil, when it is done,
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they
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are dried. Once the
noodles
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are dried, they are put into cups with vegetable and spices packets and
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finally
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finally,
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they are labelled and sealed.
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