The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs illustrate how many Europeans in both rural and urban sites were influenced by four separate kinds of
noise
, namely traffic, train, aircraft and industry during day and night
in 2007.
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that traffic had the highest records while
the opposite applied to those of industry. Moreover
, there was more noise
generated in
the day than at Change preposition
during
night
.
In detail, there were 64 million
citizens suffering from noise
of traffic, Add an article
the noise
which
compared to 34 of Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
in the rural. The record for Correct pronoun usage
them
train
in the cities was 54 Fix the agreement mistake
trains
units
, just 2 million
higher than in the countryside. When the sun went down, it can be seen a gap of 24 units
between two data of transportation in urban and rural areas, at 48 and 24, respectively. A tiny space of 2 units
exists between the quantity
of dwellers Change the quantifier
number
bore
the Wrong verb form
boring
noise
from Add an article
the train
a train
train
in cities and Fix the agreement mistake
trains
countryside
, at 8 and 6 Correct article usage
the countryside
units
, in that order.
It is also
worth mentioning that in aircraft, the figure for the cities was continuously higher than that of the rural, at 4 million
and 2 million
. Both the former and latter had 1 million
of
Change preposition
apply
inhabitant
enduring Fix the agreement mistake
inhabitants
this
noise
at night
. Surprisingly, when it comes to industry
in the countryside, no cases were bothered Add an article
the industry
while
it
just 1 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
and one quarter of it being disturbed by this
type of noise
in
Change preposition
during
day
and at Add an article
the day
a day
night
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