The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs illustrate how many Europeans in both rural and urban sites were influenced by four separate kinds of
noise
, namely traffic, train, aircraft and industry during day and
night
in 2007.
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that traffic had the highest records
while
the opposite applied to those of industry.
Moreover
, there was more
noise
generated
in
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the day than at
night
. In detail, there were 64
million
citizens suffering from
noise
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of traffic,
which
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compared to 34 of
that
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in the rural. The record for
train
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trains
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in the cities was 54
units
, just 2
million
higher than in the countryside. When the sun went down, it can be seen a gap of 24
units
between two data of transportation in urban and rural areas, at 48 and 24, respectively. A tiny space of 2
units
exists between the
quantity
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of dwellers
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the
noise
from
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the train
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train
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in cities and
countryside
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the countryside
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, at 8 and 6
units
, in that order. It is
also
worth mentioning that in aircraft, the figure for the cities was continuously higher than that of the rural, at 4
million
and 2
million
. Both the former and latter had 1
million
of
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inhabitant
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inhabitants
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enduring
this
noise
at
night
. Surprisingly, when it comes to
industry
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in the countryside, no cases were bothered
while
it
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just 1
million
and one quarter of it being disturbed by
this
type of
noise
in
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day
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the day
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and at
night
.
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