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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
energy
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consumption
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 in the USA, which is provided by a report in 2008, over a period of 50 years, between 1980 and 2030 (predicted).
Overall
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, petrol and oil accounted for the largest amount of consumed
energy
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 over the entire period,
whereas
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consumption
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 of renewable
energy
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 resources, including hydropower, solar or wind, and nuclear
energy
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, was the lowest.
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, it is predicted that similar patterns will be seen until 2030. In 1980, the figure for petrol and oil usage stood at 35
quadrillion
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units
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,
while
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 the amounts of coal and natural gas
consumption
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 were lower at nearly 16 and 20
quadrillion
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units
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. From
this
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 year until 2030, an erratic increase can be seen in the
consumption
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 of these three sources of
energy
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, where the growth in usage of petrol and oil
as well as
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 coal is predicted to be more significant (approximately 15
quadrillion
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units
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).
On the other hand
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, from 1980 to 2008, all renewable
energy
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 resources consumed fewer than 8
quadrillion
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units
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, being less popular among all six categories. The prediction
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 reveals that the variations of these figures until 2030 are marginal and insignificant, where each green
energy
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 resource will be used fewer than 10
quadrillion
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units
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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