In my opinion, I think every subject is important for us. We have to learn everything through our
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, present and
future
. Some
people
say that
History
is one of the most important school subjects it’s true but it has to go
along with
today’s world which is
Science
and
Technology
. How can we move without our
history
, the
people
behind us “The ancient
people
”
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the most powerful
people
who
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us to move forward. They taught us how to fire a light, how to find
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, how to live with other
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animals, how to survive and others. Of
we would not know that without them.
Science
and
Technology
are important too. They give us
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to move forward with them. Without them, we are just a normal human being. We spend our daily
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with no added value. Without them, we have no light, we have no food, we have no comfortable stuff and things. Old
people
can survive without these things. Human creates a lot of invention to give
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of
people
based on a limited government.
May I
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one example of the development of
science
and
technology
. With
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two things, it
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us
chanceCorrect article usage
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to be a member of
ASEANCorrect article usage
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“Association of South East Asia
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” we can be able to communicate with the other nine countries with
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high
technology
. It helps
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to be a team with the other 9 countries to develop our country. Help us in terms of transportation, communication, collaboration and so on. It can definitely hold on to that hope that in the near
overall
economics can totally
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. It is a fact that the
memberFix the agreement mistake
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of the ASEAN have differences in
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of political standing, culture and traditions but it’s not a problem with our help. I know that there
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a bright
future
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waiting for all of us and
that is
a reason why
History
,
Science
and
Technology
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important.
We use
history
to learn about others, their culture and their tradition to
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by each other more and more. And sing
science
and
technology
to help us, our country, our world to
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forward, to help each other and to give a bright
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and
future
for everyone, especially kids give a chance
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to study, to go to school, to get knowledge so the next ten years, twenty years to the new upcoming year all of them can help each other to pass these chances to others.