The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts display the
percentage
of
females
and males arrested between 1989 and 1994,
whereas
the bar chart shows, by gender, what they were arrested for and the
percentage
of arrests for every crime.
Overall
, males were arrested more than
females
, and public drinking was the most common reason for arrest for both.
To begin
, the proportion of males arrested was much greater than for
females
. 32% of them were arrested during the given period, compared to 9% for the female category.
Men
were twice as likely to be arrested for drunk driving than
females
, at slightly above 25% and just under 15%, respectively. Breach of order, theft, and other reasons were
also
higher for
men
, with all the reasons between a
percentage
of 12% and approximately 18% for both sexes. Notably, women experienced a higher rate of arrests for assault and public drinking.  The former
offense
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was at approximately 18%, quite similar to
men
's
percentage
, and the latter, the main reason for arrests, at around 38%, roughly 7% more than
men
that were arrested for committing
this
crime.
Moreover
, approximately 5% of women and
men
didn't say what they were arrested for.
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