The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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These maps

shows

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Pacific

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the Pacific

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Railway Station station between 1988 and today.

Overall

, some

building

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buildings

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have been removed and replaced by other buildings, and

other

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others

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remained the same. A

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

28 words

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