the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared to 2015

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The bar graph provides information on export earnings of five commodities in the years 2015 and 2016, measured in billion dollars,

while

the table compares their fluctuation in the same period, measured in percentages.

Overall

, petroleum products got the lion's share and textiles were the least of the proportion,

whereas

all products had a leveraging trend of change in values with the exception of gems and jewellery.

To begin

with, petroleum and engineered goods accounted for beyond 50 in the first year and rose to above 60 in the following year.

On the contrary

, gems and accessories were the only variable with a declining trend but still recorded over 40 in both years.

Additionally

, agricultural and textile products sold more than 30 in 2016,

however

, the former accounted for a slight increase,

on the other hand

, the latter had a dramatic jump.

Subsequently

, notably all categories uplifted except gems with a 5.18% drop. Despite being the lowest in terms of sum of money, textiles recorded the highest leverage at 15.24%.

Moreover

, petroleum was up 3% and engineered goods almost tripled that number.

Lastly

, agricultural greeneries had the

least

Correct word choice

lowest

show examples

number at slightly below one per cent.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Exports, categories, value, goods, services
Trends, increase, decrease, percentage, compared
Significant, minimal, fluctuation, remained stable
Domestic product, international trade, economic indicators
Manufacturing, agriculture, technology, textiles
Revenue, economic growth, trade deficit
Forecast, predict, anticipate, implications
Global market, exchange rate, competitiveness

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