You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket authority about that. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter Say who you are Give details about the accident Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Manager,
I am writing a
complain
letter about an incident in your shopping mall.
Whenever I come to your store for shopping I see the trolley section always remain with the entrance door. Replace the word
complaint
Besides
this
, I am your regular customer I bought
my grocery things from your market on a monthly basis. The receptionist is known to me and introduced me to new items in your shop. Wrong verb form
buy
However
, I have requested him to stand the trolleys on the other side because an accident can happen.
The
Correct article usage
Last
last
Sunday, a mother with her children was entering the store when her younger boy stuck in the trolley and fell down on the floor. Furthermore
, his face hurt on the ground and bled from his mouth and he cried a lot. His mother was
rushed to catch his son and she Unnecessary verb
apply
also
felt down but fortunately, she didn't hurt. The staff members and I helped him to relax and the supervisor gave him sweets to the kid.
I request to please make a separate section for the trolley section so that this
incident cannot happen in the future. If you do not consider my plea I will complain to the local authority so they will close your store.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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Logical Structure
Ensure the letter follows a clear logical structure, organizing information into distinct and well-developed paragraphs.
Greeting and Closing
Use appropriate salutations at the beginning and end of your letter to align with the formal nature of a complaint letter.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Discuss one idea per paragraph to enhance readability and coherence of your points.
Complete Response
Expand more on the suggested measures the supermarket could take to prevent future accidents and detail your personal experience with the incident to fully address all parts of the prompt.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a formal and respectful tone throughout the complaint letter, avoiding threats or overly personal anecdotes, as this ensures professionalism.
