The chart below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers
The graph shows the main reasons for
study
in students
of different age
groups, and how much support they receive from their employers. The age
group ranges from under 26 to over 49.
Overall
, the student
in the younger Fix the agreement mistake
students
age
groups tend to study
for career
. Add an article
a career
Conversely
, student
in the older Add an article
a student
age
group tend
to Change the verb form
tends
study
according to
their interest. Interestingly, the support that they receive from employers are
more when they are still young and already very old.
The percentage of Change the verb form
is
students
that study
for career
decreases as they get older: accounting for 80 Correct article usage
a career
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
students
under 26 years
old; 70 percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
students
between 26 and 29; 55 percent
for those between 30 and 39 Change the spelling
per cent
years
old; 40 percent
for those between 40 and 49 Change the spelling
per cent
years
old; and 20 percent
for those over 49 Change the spelling
per cent
years
old respectively. However
, the percentage of working
Add a hyphen
working-age
age
people that study
for interest continues to increase as they get older from only 10 percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
students
under 26 to 70 percent
for employees over 49 Change the spelling
per cent
years
old.
For support that employers give tend
to be more for employees under 26 Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
years
old and workers over 49 years
old, accounting for 65 and 45 percent
in
order. Change preposition
apply
This
is most likely due to
the age
group under 26 still being able to study
more until they can perform well at work, and giving the ones over 49 a newer mindset that also
gives them more ideas to better manage the workplace.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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