The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts illustrate the nutritional consistency ratio of two typical dinners.
Overall
,
It is clear that
,
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medium baked
potatos
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potatoes
potato
is more
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are
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healthier than macaroni because of the
less
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lower
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amount of carbohydrates and saturated fat.
To begin
with, the carbohydrate consistency of medium baked potato is about 35
percent
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per cent
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where
Correct word choice
whereas
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the
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apply
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macaroni contains just more than half of
total
Correct article usage
the total
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nutrients.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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