The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts illustrate the nutritional consistency ratio of two typical dinners.
Overall
,It is clear that
,
medium baked Remove the comma
apply
potatos
Correct your spelling
potatoes
potato
is more
healthier than macaroni because of the Verb problem
are
less
amount of carbohydrates and saturated fat.
Fix the agreement mistake
lower
To begin
with, the carbohydrate consistency of medium baked potato is about 35 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
where
Correct word choice
whereas
the
macaroni contains just more than half of Correct article usage
apply
total
nutrients.Correct article usage
the total
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