The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The provided bar chart compares the proportion of families in terms of owning or renting
accommodation
in two countries, namely England and Wales throughout a 23-year period, from 1978 to 2011.
Overall
, it is noticeable that
while
during the first half of the period in question, a significant proportion of households resided in rented houses, the
figure
relating to the households who owned an
accommodation
overtook
this
figure
from 1987 onwards.
According to
the proportion of households in owned
accommodation
,
although
this
figure
made up of just under one-fifth of the total, it gradually increased to hit a high of merely 70% in 2001 and witnessed a negligible drop to 65% afterwards.
On the contrary
, the
figure
for families in rented
accommodation
followed the opposite trend.
Although
its
figure
comprised a large percentage of the total, at approximately 86%. In the initial year,
this
figure
dropped steadily to reach a low of just under one-
third,
at 37%, in 2007, and witnessed an increment to reach 30%. until 2011.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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