The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2019 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2019 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates one country’s earnings which come from exportation activities in five different areas ( petroleum
products
, engineered goods,
gems
and jewellery, agricultural
products
, and textiles) in 2015 and 2016. The proportions of value difference between the two years are
also
outlined in the table below.
Overall
, the country increased its capacity for exportation in four different areas. The only category which decreased was
gems
and jewellery. In detail, petrolatum
products
and engineered goods were the most valuable exports in both years. Their values were around 61 and 58
billion
dollars
respectively in 2015 and
then
both went up to approximately 62
billion
dollars
in 2016.
Export
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The export
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of agricultural
products
and
of
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apply
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textiles
also
both
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apply
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climbed to roughly 31
billion
dollars
.
On the contrary
,
gems
and
jewelerly
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jewellery
was
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were
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the only sector whose
exporst
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exports
export
value fell from 44 to 41
billion
dollars
.
Moreover
, the highest rate of rise belongs to the textiles group with 15,24%.
Then
, engineered goods and petroleum followed it with 8,5% and 3% growth.The lowest rise belongs to the agricultural
products
with 0.81%. The only group that has diminished its exports was
gems
and jewellery with 5,18%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, gems, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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