The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2019 compared with 2015.
The bar chart illustrates one country’s earnings which come from exportation activities in five different areas ( petroleum
products
, engineered goods, Use synonyms
gems
and jewellery, agricultural Use synonyms
products
, and textiles) in 2015 and 2016. The proportions of value difference between the two years are Use synonyms
also
outlined in the table below.
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Overall
, the country increased its capacity for exportation in four different areas. The only category which decreased was Linking Words
gems
and jewellery.
In detail, petrolatum Use synonyms
products
and engineered goods were the most valuable exports in both years. Their values were around 61 and 58 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
respectively in 2015 and Use synonyms
then
both went up to approximately 62 Linking Words
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
in 2016. Use synonyms
Export
of agricultural Correct article usage
The export
products
and Use synonyms
of
textiles Change preposition
apply
also
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both
climbed to roughly 31 Correct pronoun usage
apply
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Linking Words
gems
and Use synonyms
jewelerly
Correct your spelling
jewellery
was
the only sector whose Correct subject-verb agreement
were
exporst
value fell from 44 to 41 Correct your spelling
exports
export
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
.
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Moreover
, the highest rate of rise belongs to the textiles group with 15,24%. Linking Words
Then
, engineered goods and petroleum followed it with 8,5% and 3% growth.The lowest rise belongs to the agricultural Linking Words
products
with 0.81%. The only group that has diminished its exports was Use synonyms
gems
and jewellery with 5,18%.Use synonyms
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