The chart shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
While
the bar diagram illustrates the export income of one country in five different categories during the period from 2015 to 2016, the table gives information about the change in
products
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value percentages in 2016 in comparison to 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that the values of all consumer goods rose except gems and jewellery.
Also
, there were not any significant increases and decreases not including textiles. In 2015 the biggest earning from export was made by petroleum products and accounted for about 6 billion dollars. In the following year income from sales of petrol grew by 3
percents
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and kept a position of product that made a profit the most.
Also
, it is noticeable that money amounts profited by gems and jewellery in both years were almost equal, there was only a small difference
by
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0.81%. The biggest change in values
happened
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that happened
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over the all period was an increase
by
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15.24% in textile goods. Before an upward
trend
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financial funds’ amount from textiles sales accounted for approximately 25.000.000.000 USD.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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