The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The two maps show the main changes which have taken
place
in the museum
between the
1998 and 2008.
In general, it appears that the Correct article usage
apply
museum
has become a much more modern place
, with a new café sitting area and fountains. One interesting change is that the shop and bags and coats place
have
been changed to the other side of the Change the verb form
has
museum
. Another striking change is that the temporary exhibition room has been built bigger. Over this
room
there is nowadays a restaurant. The garden became new fountains and a café sitting area. Another replacement has taken Add a comma
room,
place
in the museum
within the toilets. In the present day
they are right by the café. Two things did not have changed, the permanent exhibition rooms and the entrance/exit are Add a comma
day,
on
the same Change preposition
in
place
now as in 1998. Also
the garden is on
the same Change preposition
in
place
as 1998, but with little changes and modernizations.Submitted by ionyourenglish on
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