In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods . This is having a negative effects on both families and societies . To what extent do you agree or disagree

No one can deny that international fast

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are constantly on the rise

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many countries. Even

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population are enjoying international

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more than traditional

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totally agree that

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will lead to negative effects on both families and societies in health

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on environmental concerns.

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, junk

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made with high calories , fat and sugar

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harmful to human health, resulting in, medical issues or illness.

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korean

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ramen and fried chicken are most enjoyable

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for

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teenagers in

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period,which can link to

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increase in obesity, diabetes or other health issues, sometimes, leading to psychological distress.

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, both families and societies will have a huge impact on unhealthiness

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to traditional

meal

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meals

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makes it clear that consuming

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amount of junk

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are

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bad for

body

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and mind.

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, fast

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production and packaging contribute significantly to environmental degradation.

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,most of the packaging products from

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are made out of plastic materials ,so

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can

be properly ship

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to

another countries

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, improper disposal of plastic waste can cause pollution to flora and fauna.

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, traditional

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preparation methods may be more sustainable and eco-friendly.

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becomes apparent that international junk

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cause

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more harm than traditional

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. In conclusion,local

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are more healthy and

environmental

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environmentally

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friendly than

import

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foods

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.Obviously,

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pre-packaging

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will always have greater negative effects than positive effects,

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, traditional

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should not be replaced by international fast

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