No one can deny that international fast
foods
are constantly on the rise
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many countries. Even
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population are enjoying international
foods
more than traditional
foods
. In
this
,
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totally agree that
this
will lead to negative effects on both families and societies in health
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,
as well as
on environmental concerns.
Firstly
, junk
food
made with high calories , fat and sugar
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harmful to human health, resulting in, medical issues or illness.
For example
,
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ramen and fried chicken are most enjoyable
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teenagers in
this
period,which can link to
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increase in obesity, diabetes or other health issues, sometimes, leading to psychological distress.
Therefore
, both families and societies will have a huge impact on unhealthiness
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to traditional
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.
This
makes it clear that consuming
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amount of junk
food
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bad for
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and mind.
Secondly
, fast
food
production and packaging contribute significantly to environmental degradation.
For instance
,most of the packaging products from
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are made out of plastic materials ,so
this
can
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to
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.
Hence
, improper disposal of plastic waste can cause pollution to flora and fauna.
In contrast
, traditional
food
preparation methods may be more sustainable and eco-friendly.
This
becomes apparent that international junk
food
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more harm than traditional
food
.
In conclusion,local
foods
are more healthy and
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friendly than
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foods
.Obviously,
this
pre-packaging
food
will always have greater negative effects than positive effects,
therefore
, traditional
foods
should not be replaced by international fast
foods
.