The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts

provides

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information about how many per

cent

used transports in Edmonton,

while

people's reasons for using the car in town.

Overall

, the car on the pie charts shows most majority results than

other mechanism

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another mechanism

other mechanisms

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Although

, table process the commute to work most activity using in

city

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the city

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However

,

exception

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exceptions

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in the table shopping and leisure activities

very

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are very

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similar

cent

. First of all, the presented diagram gives the proportion of by car 45% and LRT 35%. And we can lowest rate, it is

bus

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a bus

the bus

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and as adjective as taxi 10%. The LRT 35% and bus 10% together seen costing. In general,

process

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the process

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table gives that commute to work by the far biggest result

fifty five

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fifty-five

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per

cent

. And slightly different from between 5 %, there are taking children to school 40% and business 40%. The together rates the taking children to school and shopping the same as

commute

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commuting

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to work 55 

cent

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cents

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